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I went to the park.
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On Saturday afternoon me and my family went to the park in Kaikohe to have fun.
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I felt pumped and keen.
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When we got to the park we saw lots of stuff to play on.
“Hmmm which one should I play on first?” I said to myself.
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The first thing I did at the park was I played on the swing.
I felt glad at the park.
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Next we played on the slide. It was cool. I felt jolly and pleased.
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After that we had a yummy lunch. “Mmm that was yum,” I said. I felt happy at the park.
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