Recount Writing - At Paihia Beach.

I am learning to add my thoughts and feelings in my writing.

20/03/17

At  Paihia beach

On Sunday morning I went to Paihia beach because it  was hot.

First I had a feed. It was yum.

Then I had a swim. The water was cold. I liked my swim.

Next I had a game of soccer. It was fun.

After that I made a sand castle. My sand castle was cool.

Later on I went to sleep and then we went home.

Finally when I got home I watched a family movie.

It was fun.  Thank you Mum for taking me to the beach.

Persuasive Writing - Rules at School.

I am learning to write my opinion with reasons.

14/03/17

Rules at school.

I  think  we should  have  rules at  school.

Firstly I  think  we  should  have  rules  at  school  

because it will  be  a  clean  school.

Secondly there will  be  no  bullying.

Another reason  is  that  there will  be  no  fighting.

So I think  we  should  have  rules at school.

Here are my learning goals for Term 1 2017.

Recount Writing

I am learning to write my ideas in order.

13/03/17

On Sunday afternoon I went to my Nana’s home on my bike.

After that me and my mum and my dad

went to Tautoro falls because it was hot.

There was a big flood at the falls and the water was going very fast.

We went home. We did not have a swim.

Persuasive Writing.

I am learning to write my opinion and add reasons.

03/03/17

It is wrong to fight   

I think it is wrong to fight.  

Firstly it is wrong to fight because people will get angry.

Secondly it is wrong because people cry.

Another reason it is wrong to fight is because people get sad.

Lastly  people get scared.

So it is wrong to fight.

Persuasive Writing

I am learning to write my opinion.

10/03/17

Brush your  teeth

I think we should brush our teeth every day.

Firstly I think we should brush your teeth every day because then we will not get holes in our teeth.

Secondly I think we should brush our then so that our teeth are clean.

Another reason is that if you brush your teeth you will have nice teeth.

Lastly I think it is good to brush teeth so your teeth stay healthy.

This is my first story for my blog.