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24.07.18

On  a hot and sunny day I was so excited to go to the pools

in Whangarei. I was jumping up and down until we got there.
I was glad that we went to the pools.
When we got there I raced as fast as a racing car to have
my swim. I was the first one to jump in the wave pool.
The water was a bit warm. When the water splashed me
I giggled. I said to my dad, “This is the best holiday ever.”
We had a long swim. It was great.

Next Dad said, “Lunch time everyone.”  
I replied, “But I don't want to get out of the water.”

Then my dad jumped in the pool and grabbed me.
He said “Pack this all away please Taonga.” Then I wasn't

allowed to jump back in the pool.

After that mum said, “Quickly jump in the pool before
your father gets back.” So I quickly jumped back in the pool.

When Dad came back he said it was OK for me to be in the pool but he said, “When I tell you all to jump out, you jump out the first time I tell you too.” I was so happy at the pools.

It was terrific.