Recount Writing At Cross Cantry

I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.

17/08/17

At the Tautoro Cross Country.

“Ready set go!” shouted Whaea Rosina.

I ran as fast as a race car. It was Wednesday morning.

I was running with the 6 year olds around the Padley Farm.

My Mum and dad were yelling and screaming at me.

Miss Simeon was supporting all the runners.

We had to run around the race course 1 time.

When I nearly got to the end my legs felt like wobbly jelly. My side felt like I got stabbed with a knife. I was aching.

My lungs felt like they were going to explode. My back was sore. My heart was pumping so fast. It was very painful.

I raced as hard as I could. I wanted to make it so I could go to Ohaeawai. I thought I was going to come 1st but I came 2nd. William came 1st. But I made it to go to Ohaeawai. I felt outstanding and terrific. I won for Red.

I felt super.