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Thursday, August 31, 2017
Wednesday, August 23, 2017
Recount Writing At Cross Cantry
I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
17/08/17
At the Tautoro Cross Country.
“Ready set go!” shouted Whaea Rosina.
I ran as fast as a race car. It was Wednesday morning.
I was running with the 6 year olds around the Padley Farm.
My Mum and dad were yelling and screaming at me.
Miss Simeon was supporting all the runners.
We had to run around the race course 1 time.
When I nearly got to the end my legs felt like wobbly jelly. My side felt like I got stabbed with a knife. I was aching.
My lungs felt like they were going to explode. My back was sore. My heart was pumping so fast. It was very painful.
I raced as hard as I could. I wanted to make it so I could go to Ohaeawai. I thought I was going to come 1st but I came 2nd. William came 1st. But I made it to go to Ohaeawai. I felt outstanding and terrific. I won for Red.
I felt super.
Monday, August 7, 2017
Recount Writing-At the beach.
I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
At the beach
02/08/17
On Saturday morning me and my family went to the beach in Opononi.
When I got to the beach we got the towels out of the car and then we got our swimming togs. We quickly got changed. We couldn’t wait to get into the water.
When we got into the water it felt cold, cold, cold.
We only had a quick swim because the water was too cold.
When we got out we changed back into our clothes so we could get warm. Then we had some lunch. I was really hungry. Our lunch was yummy.
Then we went home. It was a cool day.
Recount Writing-At the Park.
I am learning to use the correct structure and language for Recount Writing.
25/07/17
On Saturday morning I went to the park with my Mum in Kaikohe.
I said, “Mum can I take my bike to the park?”
She said, “Yes.” So I ran to get my bike in the car.
I jumped on my bike and had a big ride around the park. It was cool. I went there to have fun. I felt amazing.
I said, “Hmmm. What is the next thing I can go on?”
Mum said, “You should go on the swing.”
The swing was as tall as giraffe. I felt splendid.
When lunch was ready Mum called me.
Recount Writing-In town.
I am learning to use the correct structure and language for recount writing.
26/07/17
On Monday morning me and my mum went to town.
It was in Kaikohe. We went to get shopping. I felt happy and excited.
When I got to town I saw my dad on his truck doing his work.
“Hi Dad,” I shouted. Dad waved to me.
We went to New World. First we got some fruit and vegetables.
Next we got our lunch for me and my mum and my dad.
Then we went to practice Rugby. I felt happy.
Later on me and my dad were getting hot so we went inside.
Finally me and my mum and dad went to get our dinner. It was amazing.